Should I continue this or give it up?

wow you have ALOT of talent!!! Please keep writing, and let me tell you, grammar isnt nearly as important as the actually story! One of my relitives is currently in the process of writing a novel... and she's way older than you :) Keep it up you have a lot of potential and as you get older and take more cles your writing will improve and so will your grammar! Please keep writing you're sooooooo good!!!!!